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 Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen

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PostSubject: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:09 pm

Hollow/Arrancar Template

Base Info
Name: Reina Tinieblas
Age: 25
Age: 2600
Base Form: Arrancar

Personality:
Reina is a confident, retrospective woman who has been to every corner of Hueco Mundo, the Human World, Soul Society, and the realm that bridges these worlds. She has witnessed life and death and everything between for countless generations, and she has killed many beings during her time. She couldn’t care less if she lives or dies, having lost the instinctual drive to survive long ago. The one reason she hasn’t died is because she simply hasn’t wanted to yet.

Having lived so many years and travelled the worlds so much, she very strongly believes that everything in existence is insignificant and ephemeral. She has seen kingdoms, heroes, and dynasties rise and fall. She has experienced the wretched life of a beggar and experienced the splendorous ways of a queen and lived in every social caste between. She also chose to sit out of entire wars just to simply observe how they played out. It gained her a great level of contempt from most of her peers that she simply shrugs off without a second thought.

She keeps in the lower levels of her home an entire library filled with hundreds of bookcases containing a score of shelves each of historic records she has written over the millennia. The biographies of every being she has killed and accounts of people or creatures, Hollow, Shinigami, and Human alike, reside in those shelves, among her other works in philosophy, natural science, and the arts. Seeing the history of such powerful or important dealings being limited only to the reach of a single book reminds her of how little a life can really mean in the grand scope of existence. A wave can crash into a metropolis, but at some point it must return to its old boundaries beyond the shores as if it was never there, and the repairs will be made as if it never happened.

Reina views herself as an individual forsaken with immortality. She cannot stand younger beings that bicker for power and favor with their betters. She killed the last few fraccion she took under her wing for that very reason. She disgusts the presence of most beings that live only to quarrel for meaningless ‘power’. She often rejects many mainstream ideas of honor and other types on the basis of her own philosophy that it simply doesn’t mean anything to her, often treating others as she would children. Sometimes she even records an encounter as it happens just to illustrate the insignificance of it to her creature of interest.

Responsibility and plans are things the Reina frequently dismisses with a wave of her hand. When she wants something, she expects to get it through one method or another. The only thing any sentient creature has ever wanted was to gain more power, but Reina Tinieblas already has it and any who have tried to take it have died. She is a firm believer in corporal punishment and offers her lessons as if they are pass/fail with no second chances.

For a long time early in her years, Reina did try to figure out what the secrets of existence were, but she has long since concluded that there must be nothing. There is no God or Divine Being orchestrating the universe or its parallels. There is no plan or guiding hand for individuals to follow. There is no destiny or fate for beings to fulfill. Everything, she has come to find and believe, just is based on the circumstances that have led up to them. Very little is unpredictable when one chooses not to predict anything; most things draw only an observational "hmph".

She generally prefers to remain undisturbed by events, and gets very frustrated when she is awoken or disturbed. Every being can die at any time, and she doesn’t give a damn if it is by her hand or another’s.

One of her few indulgences, however, is throwing a wrench into others' carefully crafted plans. Often, as others jockey for power, she will find little things that will cause them to halt and sometimes even miss their opportunities. Her current writing project is about the possibility of finding beings older than she, and what they may be like based on the type of background they have in the universe as compared to herself and also the values of their times as they evolved.

Everyone has a hobby.


Apparel:
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Reina stands at five feet in height with a slightly athletic build and epicanthic, ocean-blue eyes. There are designs resembling spiral galaxies in her eyes that seem to hang onto her pupils with a single thread, making it seem as though they are galaxies feeding into her black pupils.

Her straight night-shaded hair reaches down below her waist when she lets it hang freely and upon it is a torc made of twisted obsidian that reaches at a slant from a slim line around her head ending at the lateral edges of her hairline to round off in the center of her forehead just above the level of her eyebrows. This torc is etched and contorted to resemble a demon’s face with its mouth open as if it is about to consume whatever it can pull in and it perfectly covers the remnant of her white hollow mask and hole. It can be removed as one would normally remove headwear.

She wears a white shirt that exposes her bare mid-riff and shoulders. There are slightly loose sleeves that connect to the shirt in the axillary region that reach a few inches past her elbows, the ends of them hugging her forearms snugly. Her pants are slightly baggy and her foot apparel is normal for an arrancar. Her pale skin is unblemished and her hands are finished with slender fingers. Her ears stick out horizontally, ending in a point finished with a pair of blue, sparkling earrings in the shape of a star.

Her slender face is generally expressionless and her eyes empty. Someone gazing into her eyes might feel as though they are being swallowed up in something much larger than themselves. It’s almost as if they see the cold face of death itself. They might as well be. Whenever she fights, entire portions of a realm simply disappear.


Zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Name: Hueco Caducado
Zanpakutou Call Out: Consumir el Universo, Hueco Caducado (Consume the Universe, Hollow Void)
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Hueco Caducado hovers in the air and expands to over twenty-five times its original mass, then bursts into a sphere of light. A moment later the light is shed and the orb implodes on itself to the original size of the zanpakutou, then it implodes further to less than one tenth, A moment of intense gravitational pull is experienced, throwing witnesses off balance, then it releases itself into a vast cloud that engulfs Reina.

Reina stands at seven feet in height and her body is covered with hieroglyphs, calligraphy, cuneiform, and other ancient scribings native to each civilization of each realm that are based in demon magic. The only properties these writings hold is that they contain great mass, and if each were to be released Reina would stand at over thirty-five feet in height. They cannot be released. By being contained in these tattoo-like designs, her body is able to condense itself into a much smaller space (her current height) while maintaining the same mass. Her hierro is naturally stronger in her released state, but the scribings add to her body's density to give her skin's hierro an extra boost over her peers.

She has black wings and her hair has shortened to mid-length with white wisps in the front. Her eyes seem to glow slightly and now resemble a scattering of stars and galaxies that spiral in motion to her pupils, whereas before they were motionless. Strapped to each hand is a single short metal rod with narrowed ends, about eight inches in length, that she can use in close-quarters combat or to summon her black holes by causing them to spin at a rapid rate and generate their own magnetic field similar to that of gravity.


Black Dance:
Reina crushes matter into a tiny area of infinite density and zero volume. This is a singularity. Though it is not as strong as a naturally formed singularity, it is still quite powerful and influential, and any material that is close enough to actually reach the unnatural singularity will be damaged, though most of the time things are only pulled, not taken in. Reina needs to be able to see where she makes the singularity, meaning that she cannot cause one to form in an opponent's lungs or inside a chamber that is resistant to rei-based senses..

She can inflict micro-tears in a target’s defenses or cause a temporary pull on an opponent’s attack to re-direct or throw off their maneuvers. The result is an unexpectedly inaccurate, weaker, or accelerated motion that challenges their balance. She can use the singularities to aid or pull her own attacks and cause them to accelerate, increasing the physical damage she can inflict. Because she has trained this ability over centuries her balance is not thrown off and she can take full advantage of the postive or negative accelererations. An opponent generally won't realize that a singularity is effecting them until Reina decides to tell them, or uness they already know of her ability.

Reina can use several singularities at a time, enabling her to engage in combat effectively against multiple opponents. She can supply the singularities a constant flow of reiatsu to sustain them for a period of time, or she lets them form, pull, and die.


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Reina can specialize a Singularity to grow and open wide enough for several individuals to walk through. This adaptation must have a sister counterpart in another realm or location. The wormhole has an extremely rare possibility of sending an individual to another time that Reina cannot control for, which is what makes this ability something of a gamble. If an individual were to be transported to a time before she became an Arrancar, she could be killed before she even reached Las Noches.

This specialized wormhole is an entrance that is split between two exits, each one being in the other realms. This means that Reina does not need to deal with the inconvenience that Garganta can cause its travellers. A Wormhole in the Living World will have exits to Hueco Mundo or Soul Society. A wormhole in Hueco Mundo will have exits into the Living World and Soul Society. A wormhole in Soul Society will have an exit in the Living World and an exit in Hueco Mundo. There can be multiple splits when a target is sent to a specific realm. These splits are multiple places within each realm and Reina can predetermine the path because the exits are anchored in rei-based symbols inscribed using her own blood. Because they are rei-based they do not fade away. She has not yet figured out how to make her inscriptions stay permanently in Garganta due to the creatures that sweep through that realm and clean them.

These specializations can be used to shorten travel time, throw an enemy into a trap, get a target hopelessly lost, etc. The wormholes are one-directional, meaning that an individual cannot travel back through the same wormhole unless it is dispersed and remade. Only Reina is capable of this.

Rogue Universe:
This is a slow-developing ability (two posts). This ability is different from the others in that it is a singularity that is on the move. Constantly.

Reina disperses a thick, expansive cloud spanning approximately twenty square kilometers and several thousand meters into the air. This cloud is mostly dust with a portion of her reiatsu dispersed through out it to maintain its form. The cloud cannot be dispersed by any means unless it is absorbed by the black hole. She sparks a four-foot black hole that churns its way through the cloud at high speed, pulling in the dust and bringing into existence a series of small stars at an extremely rapid pace. All parties, including Reina must be wary of its path, or they may be pulled in. If Reina gets in trouble, she can disperse the entire phenomenon, but it will take a substantial amount of energy. The gravitational pull into the singularity lies within the cloud, only. Anyone outside the cloud will be safe until the blast at the end.

Eventually, the black hole re-centers, sucks the small galaxy and all its contents into itself, forming a quasar. Anyone still in the cloud will sustain damage if they survive. When the singularity is rendered idle, all activity in or around it will stop for as long as it takes to summon up a normal cero, then it will spew the matter out in a supermassive energy blast. This energy blast is exponentially greater in power and destructive force than a gran rey cero. The blast is two-directional, each heading in an opposite direction on an even line.


Hollow Abilities:
Cero, Hierro, Pesquisa, Sonido and Bala.
Reina can perform Grand King Cero, though it is proportionally nothing special when compared to the other Arrancar. Her bala blasts look like blue and white stars flying toward her opponents, each leaving a short tail in its wake, though they, too, do not have a destructive capability greater than normal.



Back Drop

Background:
Reina Tinieblas was killed by the people in her tribe in present day Colombia for putting the civilization at risk of receiving the wrath of the Gods that required human sacrifice to bring the sun back each day. She had grown up with four older brothers who had not left her out of their games and learning, and by the time she was sixteen she was as knowledgeable in the man's chores as they were, and, in some cases, better. These chores included hunting, building, and combat.

Despite her prowess, potential, and how much the elders enjoyed her company, she was not of like mind among her people about the rising of the sun. On the night when her family had been selected to be sacrificed during a time of peace among the neighboring civilizations, she ran away, but returned to her village to convince her closest male friend to run off with her.

He turned on her and alerted the village, and she was sacrificed just in time to allow the sun to rise. Her body was impaled and consumed in flame, but her soul remained. It was an experience she never imagined was true.

While she wandered the rainforest, her soul slowly slid into despair due to the betrayal by her closest friend, the loss of her family, and gaining the contempt of her people. She was horrified to find that the stories of malformed and malignant spirits were true, but they also told her that the sacrifices were merely to supply them with a steady source of souls for food. The sacrifices that were meant to give the sun life each day were nothing more than a meal plan, and her people, strongly given to superstition, had no idea. And there was nothing she could do to change that.

For several weeks she escaped these evil spirits, but eventually, nihilism overtook her essence and she began to hunger for souls to fill the void. She, too, became a creature known as a hollow, but she knew she would become something far deeper and worse than they. She was something akin to, but wholly different from, what they were. And she didn't care at all except to feed her hunger.

Less than a century passed by before she became a collective of hollow souls known as a Menos, and shortly thereafter she overruled all others with her nihilistic viewpoint of life, showing that she was the dominant force among the hundreds of souls making up her body. From this stage of existence, she moved on to what was called an Adjuchas.

As an adjuchas she appeared to be more human, but still something different. She decreased in size and gained more power, she also found that the other hollows, especially those among her peer Adjuchas, tasted sweeter than the individual souls she had always eaten. Once more she began to feed to sate her immense hunger, and she gained the ability to consume on a mass scale by creating gravity. Her body became a singularity into which other creatures would be consumed.

It would be several hundred more years before she would become powerful enough to take on an almost entirely human form that revealed the most powerful being among the realm, and several hundred more until she mastered her abilities and became the First Espada. She currently is the Queen, peerless in her power and ability in Hueco Mundo and Las Noches.

During Aizen Sosuke's reign, her nihilism had taken full rein of her, and she stepped down from power with a shrug and took a privaron's number. She sat out the Winter War and the invasion of Las Noches by Ichigo Kurosaki and his band of miscreants. Instead, she watched and wrote what she saw. No detail missed her scrutiny, and this only fed her belief that an individual is nothing in the grand scheme of Time and the Universe.

The war ended porly for Aizen and his underlings, as per her own prediction of what the outcome would be, but the contempt she received from her peers was immense. However, after a few ill-fated attempts at killing her, it became clear that despite her show of submission, she was not any weaker than she had been before. Whether or not she will ever hold a title that symbolized sole leadership among her kind, in the eyes of her peers she would always be Queen.


Side Note:
Reina's library is deep within the ruins of Las Noches, accessible only by her. Within it are records of every being who has shown the potential to become an influential character on the layout of the realms. Every person has a book dedicated specifically to them, and every event is transcribed in great detail.

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RP Sample: [Show us what you're made of.]


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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:32 pm

IF you made a blackhole the whole planet would be sucked in....

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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:11 pm

mizuame wrote:
IF you made a blackhole the whole planet would be sucked in....


I go into detail about how that ability works, if you would read more than just the title...

However, I will go through it to find anything that might have been confusing for you to improve its clarity.

For future reference, please refrain from commenting on another person's application if you are not a Moderator. That way we can avoid clutter and chaos and our applicants won't feel as though they are being harassed or accosted - I've seen a lot of RPers with good potential simply leave a site because the other members decided to jump in while the approval process was being conducted. I, myself, have simply left sites because things became too unruly for a moderator to even want to deal with it.

If you have any reasonable concerns about an application, please let Feu, Rase, or me know via private message and we'll look into it and find a resolution. Obviously, in this case, you may not consider me a viable option, though I do not turn a deaf ear to a concern about any of my characters. That still leaves you two other people to contact. It's kind of disrespectful regarding our discretion and integrity.

Please respect the process.
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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 7:31 pm

I read the whole thing( you applied too much science for a bleach technique imo but I still read it ) , what I am saying is your attack is not a black hole that would end all and everything.

And I will comment if I see fit since there are no rules saying not to. You should phrase your own moves better since its not a black hole . Some people get so touchy over the slightest things.

Your move is simply a powerful gravity based technique that imo is way too over-powered as you make statements like * it cant be dispersed* yet it can weaken and absorb attacks ?? Your basically trying to get more than one ability and be being clever about it ...

I was not going to go all out about the seemingly " Hax" nature of your power but you were so rude I thought I may as well. Being a moderator does not give you a right to talk down to other members only to approve things and make various topics . I was simply stating an opinion don't get so worked up as a moderator I expect you to stay calm and not get personal ...please don't under achieve that expectation.

And if someone is so childish to leave since a member commented on their profile ...I wont comment. Most people like contribution since it helps everyone have consensus with all the RPers as some people will find others powers too hax etc.

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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:25 pm

Worked up? Nah. Just a formally worded copy/paste statement with relevant names inserted stating that it would be nice if you would try to avoid undercutting the moderators. It's a matter of simple respect, but, eh, can't win'em all. If that wasn't the case, no offense ought to be taken since it was a simple misunderstanding...

A black hole is a singularity with an immense density. It's not just a big gaping thing that stuff simply falls into, and, as a result, not everything would be absorbed all at one time. Otherwise we wouldn't have much of a universe left, right? The area and nature of the effects are very clearly designated, so I don't see why concerns about the world being destroyed is relevant. It is not a true black hole that naturally occurs - that should have been obvious as Reina forms it by her own power - but it certainly is a supercondensed center of gravity, which has its own inherent properties. "Black Hole" that was just the name given to it. I'll try to think of something more creative.
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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:58 pm

PS - glad we had this conversation. Helped me figure a couple things out about the character. Making an original character isn't easy, y'know? ^__^
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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:40 pm

Approved. ^-^

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PostSubject: Re: Tinieblas, Reina - Arrancar Queen   Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:41 pm

There we go , so your glad we had it , told you it helps when people comments on others profiles , sorry I took your words the wrong way it seemed you were being "funny" with me . and I agree making original characters is not easy , I write my own manga ( not published of course ) and of course cant replicate anything from other works.

btw I had a thought were you could open gargantua that suck people into the void between hueco mundo and the said location. So you could add gravity reiatsu with gargantuas??

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